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Comedic Barber

Image Doctor: Comedic Barber

Photographer: Hubert Reed

Added: 23-May-12

Camera Type: Nikon D7000

Lens: 16-85 MM

Shutter Speed:

Aperture:

Adjustments: A little photoshop work.

Photographer's Comments: My local barber is a comedian and does great haircuts, far better than going to a fancy salon and being hassled to buy hair products.

Image doctor's advice

Hi Hubert,

As I look at this image there is going to be absolutely no confusion in the world that I'm actually looking at a barbershop (that is unless you've bumped your head recently and have woken up speaking a different language). The 'Barber' sign is the largest feature of this photograph and hardly needs to be highlighted in red.

Getting beyond the obvious though, what are the essential elements that go into making a barber’s shop special. For me, the obvious icon would have to be the barber's chair, which is why I think it is really important to make that chair stand out from the shadows.

In the image below I have reworked the tones to increase the detail in the chair while at the same time adding some contrast and clarity to the shop window.

For good measure I think it is also important to highlight what I will assume is one of his customers sitting in the café to the left of frame.

My final adjustment has been to darken down the accountant’s window and with that I think the picture is starting to tell more of the story.

I think you should make this gentleman a personal project. Go back and spend a couple of hours in his store and this time, get closer with the camera… chances are you might be able to capture more of his wit.

As I write this I am reminded of The Beatles song, Penny Lane… get it right and this barber could be showing your photographs!

Cheers, Anthony

 

Image Doctor's edited version

reader comments
  • I look at Hubert's photo and see a story, we live sometimes in a black & white world, but going to a barber who I assume has a great personality, adds that extra humour getting a haircut rather than a boring haircut, hence the red sign. Also agree to a point with anthony as well. Great picture! tony
    Tony Gilroy on 01-Jul-12 04:38 PM

  • I think Hubert's red sign added fun to the picture and Anthony's version suffers from clutter due to the increased contrast. Still, a fun pic. Tom
    Tom Torda on 29-Jun-12 10:26 AM

  • Great Photo!!
    Anthony biel on 28-Jun-12 12:07 PM

  • Hi Anthony, thank you for the time reviewing the photograph, and I couldn't agree more. I will go back and incorporate the classic barber chair. Once again thank you for your time. Cheers, Hubert
    hubert reed on 26-Jun-12 10:12 PM

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